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corykong2
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http://earn4stuff.blogspot.com/ any suggestions for my site? |
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Cubsrule84
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i think it looks very nice. you put a lot of detail in. Nice job! 
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corykong2
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i think it looks very nice. you put a lot of detail in. Nice job!
Cubsrule84
appreciate it tnx
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nitemare12
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'Do you want to get something that you really want but have to money? <- Fix Grammar Mistake. 'Trust Me'. <- Don't Say things like Trust me. Then they will ask themselves, Why Should I trust You? I don't Know you. 'By "knowing the site" means that you must first read the sites "FAQ" and it's "Learn More" tab. These two will make it simple and easy for you to complete offers.' <- You don't really need to tell them that. They will get a message from 'Admin' When they sign up, telling them to read those. It doesn't really fit in with what you're writing either. Try to make you're paragraphs flow, then it seems more professional. 'http://www.points2shop.com/?ref=corykong2'<- When editing Blogspot posts, you can make it so something is a link, so they can just click it to go to the site. Make them a link, so your customers have to do as little work as possible. It always annoys me when I have to copy+paste URLs. Read through it again, and edit things to make it flow more, and make it shorter. Also fix the spelling mistakes, Spelling mistakes makes it seem less professional. Less Professional makes less people believe it. Good Luck
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corykong2
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'Do you want to get something that you really want but have to money? &lt;- Fix Grammar Mistake.
'Trust Me'. &lt;- Don't Say things like Trust me. Then they will ask themselves, Why Should I trust You? I don't Know you. 'By "knowing the site" means that you must first read the sites "FAQ" and it's "Learn More" tab. These two will make it simple and easy for you to complete offers.' &lt;- You don't really need to tell them that. They will get a message from 'Admin' When they sign up, telling them to read those. It doesn't really fit in with what you're writing either. Try to make you're paragraphs flow, then it seems more professional. 'http://www.points2shop.com/?ref=corykong2'&lt;- When editing Blogspot posts, you can make it so something is a link, so they can just click it to go to the site. Make them a link, so your customers have to do as little work as possible. It always annoys me when I have to copy+paste URLs. Read through it again, and edit things to make it flow more, and make it shorter. Also fix the spelling mistakes, Spelling mistakes makes it seem less professional. Less Professional makes less people believe it. Good Luck nitemare12 oh i didn't know i had a lot of mistakes....oh well thanks for noticing it
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